so you would like to get to know me
are you sure?
i think you better leave because i can get real deep.
IL start off with the basics read the title yep that's me.
im a minor 16 not yet free.
2 more years then il breathe
brown hair brown eyes 5'5 i promise that's not a lie
it takes a lot for me to cry
but i bet you wouldn't believe i have attempted suicide
not cause my parents not cause my friends
all because i was raped in the rear end
but later on i started getting in with the trend
wearing hollister and fitch i became such a bitch.
i have a job working Saturdays but im deffinitley not rich
sometimes i do drugs but rarely smoke dro
but every Saturday i like to get throwed
speed and diet pills help me to lose weight
but when that's all gone
binging and purging is my only way
all these secrets that i just told
only all poetry will ever know.
so i beg of you to never tell
my friends have already put my life through hell.
A contest entry
- Show me you by Sabre Felcat.
1310 points, ended November 14, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whats your first thought.?
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well what can i say about the truths told here? deep and sadening, thats for sure. but an interesting piece to provide insight into who you are to one who is a complete stranger. i respect that.
thanks for entering and goodluck in the contest
~Sabre Felcat
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wow that was really nice!
it was such a good read !
i loved the flow and rhyming was not forced at all!
keep it up! and keep sharing
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Wow...tehre's a line there that's hard hitting.
I also like how you don't blame ypour parents. So many people do.
I like your honesty, I must say. It too took a lot to see me cry. And at 16, I know people who have tried to commit suicide. One of my best friends in fact... And it breaks my heart to think they're in that much pain.
And the end of this write...so sad!
B&P...So much self destructive behaviour!
Just.. I want you to know, that apart from the drugs, I've been there too...
I know what it's like to want to be lost in the oblivion of alcohol...
Yes...
This was a very honest write- and no, I shan;t tell. This site is a refuge for me too. -
Nicely written, this is so full of a truth and honesty that could bring the strongest person to their knee's. I really like this one, keep writing it all out and hopefully it will cleanse your soul so that you can feel at peace and have some freedom. Wicked write my poetic friend!
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Thats some deep sh!t!
Did that just come to you?
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Believe it or not, but that's Angelina. But she's super nice and an amazing person to talk to. That's why I love her so much^-^
She's a great friend!
And everything here is true.
~Breathe.Into.Me
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