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Beads of Passion

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Heated winds at dusk arouses the senses

as the moonlight accentuates each curve

Soft whispers break down sorrows fences

wilst fingertips trail each bead of passion

 

Amongst the stars your sweet beauty danced

as the beam of passion you ride full throttle

Sighs of discovery as the enjoyments enhanced

by delicate fingers exploring the inner core

 

Alongside the beam the pleasure is heightened

as the length is swallowed by the evening rose

Lusts tender spot made heated muscles tighten

and roars from the storm rage in satisfaction

 

Dew drips off the petals of loves delicate rose

as the beam of pleasure rests discreetly inside

Not near exhausted against the base warmth blows

while she brings to attention the limp and worn

 

Hands gently stroking the pleasuring prize

and moisture again develops between her thighs

Heartbeats dancing within the center of eyes

as they get lost once more in passionate play

 

The flower bends upon lusts wistful command

then right behind her he makes his stand

Fingertips gripping tight as he shoves in on demand

allowing the petals to tighten then give way

 

Moonlights leaving soft marks down the spine

as his tongue traces the delicate outline

Fingertips and hair will passionately entwine

while inside her rose he's lost in foreplay

 

River of stars flow as ecstasy paints the skies

upon final thrusting they collapse in exhausted sighs

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

From Earth to the Moon I shall ride
on the beam of passion you share
Feeling the warmth of you inside
is more than anyone can bare....

<3 Passionspromise

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  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 8

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    This had lines in it that had me in ah with its words. The way it flows just so soft but strong. This had passion and was romantic from start to finish. Such a joy to read SH

  • mcfreeman
    October 21
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    a garden of pleasure....

    such a colorful array...


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 20

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    Passionate, sensuous, erotic and in triplets

    Written by the mistress of the genre

    What is not to love?

    Love

    Jeff


  • Griswold gold member
    October 19

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    Beautifully written sweetheart, a wonderfully sensual and visual write indeed. You my dear could make a limp noodle hard. It's always a pleasure to hear you read these, and to read it is a pleasure again. Love you baby... Scott

  • Winwood
    October 19

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    Your words paint a picture even a blind man could see...you have a talent with prose...and a passion for all things earthly

  • more and more that is all i can say, you seem to move me, each and everyday, keep it flowing


  • ravikochar
    October 18
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    Wonderful play of words..its an awesome effort with a magnificent result.


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 18

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    You sure know how to take your words and make them come to life. Great job on this sensual write Passions. Keep up the good work.
    Steve


  • JohnnyD gold member
    October 18

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    Hmmnnn, this is really one of the finer ones you have done of recent in this passionate style.. Perfect visuals flow with each stanza, enhanced by perfection of true metaphoric genius. Great job gal!


    Bravo!

    Love ya tory,

    Len


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      October 18

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      Yes I am a genius lol..Yes i liked this one alot
      Love ya too hon
      thanks for your comment

      Tory

      • JohnnyD gold member
        October 18
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        for indeed Passions, thou art the Queen of Erotica, and the most favored of the Kings court, and throughout the lands of Arthur.

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