I messed up
Everything in my life
The first day i was born
I messed up
When you 2 got in a fight
I hated my life
And i cried
I felt so weak
I couldnt do anything
Except to myself
So i took that piece of glass
I then cut myself
Until i started to bleed
I looked at the cut
And realized
I felt so much better
Im nothing to the world
Just another one of its pets
To see how strong i am
To torcher me
And then kill me
I cant stand this world
Or all the pain im in
Lets put this razor to my vein
Watch the blood
As each drip means
Closer to death
A puddle forms
On this world i never adored
Im a horrible person
But i wasnt happy
Im sorry everyone
But i must die
So goodbye
And goodnight
Forever
My poem i think its bad what do u think?
Comments
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this was awesome... i can totally relate....i cut myself too......especially lately when my parents fight...keep writing you're really good
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i love this...it's really good. i can relate i feel the same way sometimes. i hope you keep writing. i enjoyed it a lot.
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