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I Saw You

I thought I was done with love
When the last one walked away
Without one single word to say

Thought I could lock my heart up
So the fragile thing, would stay
Away from all the world's pain

But then I saw you, sitting there
Wind gently playing with your hair
Yes, I saw you in a different light
And I'm not giving up without a fight

Most of the world would like to reject
But I hope you can possibly accept
These broken pieces I call my heart

If there was only one thing left to say
I would simply kneel and beg you to stay
Right by my side, I'd love you one last time

But then I saw you, sitting there
Wind gently playing with your hair
Yes, I saw you in a different light
And I'm not giving up without a fight

When my whole world fell apart, that day
You are the only one who would stay
With me and watch the sun set and rise
Will you be there for me always I wonder
I pray that it will be so for I cannot go on
Without you, my heart will be long gone

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  • Krpperkins
    November 20
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    this is awesome


  • Levis
    November 14

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    You cant run away from love, at least thats what they say. Beatiful write, harmonious and very rythmatic