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A Twisted Desire (Mature Content)

Within your veins, I creep and crawl
Slithering through, your blood to stall
I watch and wait, for your dark destiny
To call you back to me, beloved misery

Festering and rotting, from soul to core
Indulging your fantasies, natures wh---
I cut your soul and watch it bleed again
Ripping bone and flesh, from deep within

It is the toxin, created by evil, greedy men
Also known to the world as sweet heroin

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  • Sweet-Sins
    October 27
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    wow this is strong feeling!!!
    xx