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The Biggest Mistake

We started to learn
what love was
but it was to late
already in love
with another
moved far away
with her to stay
but it was a lie
The Biggest Mistake
now looking back
should have stayed
but the world
we were in
had bad memories
and I had
to move on
had i known
what I do now
we would have
been together
in the first place
a dream come true
but you're so
far away
I lost that
special day
with you
regret now
perhaps
but then
it's what I had
to do
but it will
always be
my Biggest Mistake

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  • Tqop
    October 18
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    Great job. Nice job on relaying your feelings and emotions of letting go of love.