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Shattered Silence

Alien words plague the outside world
Forcing the listener to beckon on every word
Pushing him deeper into total confusion
Dedicated statements that have no conclusion

Three voices that are in constant debate
Absorbing his life in emotional hate
Grasping his sanity in tight-fisted hands
Forcing him to listen to their constant demands

Word and sentences mingle together in time
Destroying a feeble yet educated mind
Obliteration of every human feeling
As new innuendos start to begin

The shattering words have taken over his mind
Leaving all judgment left behind
A new horizon is in the midst
But the voices force these thoughts to be dismissed.

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  • Sapphire Eyes
    October 18
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    wow really good write!! scary, must be really hard to have this, i cant even imagine, once again great write!!

    • DemonLDR
      October 19
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      Thanks Sapphire I think it still needs a little work, it just doesn't flow enough for me.