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Butterfly



colorful garden-

white butterflies fly amongst

budding surprises

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • Jfd
    November 1
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    a very nice haiku, thanks for entering


  • Mr.
    October 18

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    It's a pretty haiku.