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Autumn Daydream

 

 

Pinholes in curtains shimmer

through with red and gold's

of autumn.
I pull back the glitter of starlight

to reveal the October morning;
and sprawl upon sunlight,

gathered by the soft

berber carpet.
Which I often do when

slumber clings to sleepy limbs.
I window shop for day dreams

among frost bitten daisy's,
and fallen tears from

windblown roses:
and drift away into the

crisp cool calm,

of fall.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Daizee silver member
    November 10

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    This is so refreshing. I love the transition from summer days into fall. I think your body just comes alive. Your poem captures those breathtaking moments.

    Stacy


  • Titus gold member
    October 29

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    a beautiful feel and visual for autumn, great read.


  • Jesann gold member
    October 27

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    Simply beautiful.!!
    Lovely imagery, wording and emotion.
    A really enjoyable read.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 23

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    Thanks friend for putting words to a most beautiful time of year, that I have been engrossed in in my travels lately...
    "frost bitten daisies, fallen tears from wind blown roses"
    keep penning poet...Nice to see you back!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 22

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    Tony your word say so much,
    but this one is just stunning!

    well done as always Master Poet

    Love and blessings

    Rend


  • midnight51
    October 21

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    Pinholes in curtains shimmer

    through with red and golds

    of autumn.
    I pull back the glitter of starlight

     

    I like this opening very much, especially when you go from the allusion of night to the affirmation that it is indeed morning and sun-shining.

     

    Josh 

  • catstar
    October 21

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    This piece is full of beautiful imagery. You leave the reader breathless and in my case, wishing their could join in this daydream. Its so beautiful. Thank you for sharing.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 19

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    ... fallen tears from wind blown roses ...
    Now that is an amazing image. Very nicely done. I enjoyed this very much. ~Pamela


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 18

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    soft and light...this poem falls gently. Thank you.
    Love, L


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 18

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    Wow Tony.. As always you write with such amazing imagery. This is gorgeous. Now I know what fall is my favorite season...you paint it so beautifully with your words! Great work and all the best to you!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 18

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    you are the most gentle man with words. I love the line "I window sjop for day dreams" and "and fallen tears from

    wind blown roses.
    And drift away into the

    crisp cool calm,

    of fall.
    a great write my friend. Sandra




  • Cannonsfire
    October 18

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    That is one of the softest yet most vivid picture of fall I've ever read, you paint it beautifully with your words C

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