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Haiku – [wildflowers]




                              wildflowers
                      in mid-morning’s buzz
                                          a honeybee’s    cling





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picture inspired;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2463/921.jpg?1255901703

modern form Haiku

Zen

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 31
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    the middle line was very good I liked that


  • Naughtygrlred
    October 19
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    honey


  • azure85 gold member
    October 18

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    Oh, this is a beautiful haiku for the prompt! I wish it were spring again, and to see the little bees around the garden. A lovely thought for the day reading your haiku.