Into the darkness
abyss like reality-
formed one desire.
Taunting our trust of fate,
surrendering time.
Likened to the birch in May
natures song knows no bounds
of loves last fortress.
In natures eyes we redeem-
human nature eyes
again in darkness
sweltering heat encompassed
fountains of deep blue-
Saga's of summer requit disbelief
until ragweed again grows.
Elms turn gold
and emberous maples flaunt
sassy as winds blow.
Love again turns within
sauntering along, time has past
chilled stars, blackend skies
naked trees stifly stand tall-
shivering and cold.
Again we embrace passion,
full-circle we come once more.
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- Metaphysical Poems #3 by drifting cloud.
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Comments
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well done thiswas like someone illuminating the darkenss so well that there would not be any need to fee dark at all..how could one feel dark after that yeah..super poem -
This takes the reader on a journey circling back, painting vivid pictures and feelings as we go. Thank you for entering the contest ‘Metaphysical Poems #3’.
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This is a joy to read, i loved how I felt transported through a journey, new and yet known. Beautifully written
I love the line
"and emberous males flaunt" -
i loved this, i love how you connect the nature with seasons, i like how you've shown it, excellent imagery. The way it reads is in itself beautiful also
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