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I Had The Answers

I awoke one morning
With a smile on my face
I had all the answers
To help the human race

How to stop the war
Stop hunger and more
How to lower fuel cost
And find children that are lost

How to stop all the crime
Close the jails down in time
Stop global warming
Stop all things allarming

I had all the answers
I had all problems solved
When I tried to remember
None were recalled

So keep a pen and paper
Right there by your bed
And write while your sleeping
Before it leaves your head




Author notes

I had a dream like that and woke up so happy, but couldn't remember a thing about how to do it,but I was happy for a few minutes

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    October 22
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    LOL..THIS IS A REALLY WELLCRAFTED PIECE...NICE WRITE
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    • jimek
      October 22
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      Thanks

      I really woke up one morning like that. I was so happy. For a minute


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 18

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    This was a very well written piece you have written. I enjoyed reading this. This piece had a good flow too it as well. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.