Connected, to all
one with Universe,
cosmos, whole.
Atom in God's
make-up;
flickering flight.
Glowing,
growing
climbing ever
higher.
Reaching
for the answers
to questions
not yet asked.
Author notes
where spirit went...
not sure if someone else wrote "to questions not yet asked" but I use it a lot...because I wonder just what we haven't even thought to ask yet!
A contest entry
- Metaphysical Poems #3 by drifting cloud.
1000 points, ended November 3, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Reaching
for the answers
to questions
not yet asked.Author notes
This was awesome!!!!!!!!
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Inviting the reader to open their mind, plus a feeling of wholeness and connectivity. Questions not yet asked - the answers await us! Very nice poem. Thank you for entering the contest ‘Metaphysical Poems #3’.
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Nicely done
Yes indeed to quesions not yet asked is a muse of a lifetime
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simplicity
never ending journey of growth
very beautiful
God bless you my friend...
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I love it, so straightforward, and the clarity, your background is interesting to, since water is usually a symbolization of a purifying substance. also what we are made of also, well some of us. this is excellent in many ways, i love how you broughth up the universe and atoms..
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This is so intense. I was listening to really eerie music when I read it and it went with the poem well. Your words are so open and thought-provoking. Good luck in the contest!
~Sparrow
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