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Why i cry...

I feel a warm wet substance run down my face
I watch you walk away, and realize it hurts me to watch you go
The pain is like the first cut all over again
I just sit here and wait for you to come back into my arms again
That is if you come back
There is why i i shed the tears, when you walk away will you really come back?

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