I'm not the kind of girl you can hold down
You've got to see my point
You've got to see it through my eyes.
If you would understand
then maybe I would too.
Or maybe I'm the one who needs to see
Then you'll see it the way I do.
Or maybe its all gonna be lost
With no one winning the prize.
But what prize is there to win
If I lose you because of a small whim?
Maybe it is more than I can see
Or maybe it is more than you know.
Perhaps we jumped in too soon,
When we really should have taken things slow.
I don't want to lose something wonderful.
But a dream is a dream,
And I wonder if this is truly reality.
So I guess this is up to you.
Say those words if you think it'll make everything good.
Just remember that I love you,
And you're the one who made the choice.
Author notes
Alright, I wrote this like two seconds ago. Me and my boyfried are fighting, about some really stupid stuff. It happens a lot, and I am tired of it. So, these are my thoughts.
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This was a very moving piece you have here. I really enjoyed reading this. i am sure that there are tons of people out there that can relate too this. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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