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For my Doodoo sweetpea with the fake plastic stomach and the cute face (lost emo) xD Please dont die

I wish I had a magic wand
To make you feel better
I’d take away your afflictions, with a wave of my hand
From a frown to a smile, the sombre look on your face would alter

I’d think sweet thoughts; I’d send you love;
I’d channel healing vibes;
My wand and I would surely beat
Whatever the doc prescribes

But there is no magic wand, so
Do what it takes to get mended
For I cannot cast a spell
To make you feel alright
So please let your sickness be ended
As when you are sick, it gives me quite a fright
And I pray you will soon be well!


Author notes

Dave is one of my favourite pple everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
i love him even though he thinks im a pest! =[ i try my hardest not to get on his nerves but it doesnt always work-not sure why.

I hope he gets well soon and that he doesn't have a big gaping hole in his stomach or that his lung got twisted in a knot again it does that sometimes.. when it gets bored ya know..

xD check out the categories: Love, Friendship, Weird, Sweet, Other, Humour, Thoughts, Dave
looolllzz

i hope he gets well really really soon because he rocks and i love him and i hope we get to be friends til we're 100 yrs old with really long white beards like Dumbledore. Also i just wanna take this opportunity to let him know that he does mean a lot to me and that it hurts me as well when we argue and that i hope we'll never have another argument and tick each other off again and i hope that when we start camming again he'll still be as fun as he was before and we can do our crazy boogie and our lil crab thingy and maybe play truth or dare and play guitar together and i wanna see him headbang again coz he rules at it.

yea.. and i know this is gonna piss him off because he doesnt like my poems and doesnt like it when i talk a lot so im sorry
and also my wish is that he'd write me a poem back even if it is just one that says how annoying i am but i dont think its gonna happen coz im not that special you see.

anywaaayssssssss.. Get well soon!
ps- hope you comment, i have skl tomorrow and im staying up writing this while you're sleeping. lol

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  • This was a very well written piece of work you have written here. I enjoyed reading this. It was very good! Thanks for the read and keep up te good work.

  • Honey Bunches
    October 23

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    Sweetheart, he sounds like a jerk! and I'm sorry because I know that you have feelings for him. But anyone who tells you you're annoying isn't very special at all. Because you are not annoying. You are very talented. I love your poetry. It's very hard for me to tell if you two are dating, or not, but if he's the right one, he'll understand you and respect you for who you are. Obviously, you care about him because you wouldn't be writting him poetry and openly admitting it. I don't know how things actually are with you two, but he sounds unappreciative. But I could be wrong and you could be over exaggerating a bit. We all do. But I do pray and hope he gets better. and I applaud you for your brilliant piece of poetry. I was delighted reading it. Luvs ya!