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Side by Side

take my hand
i still sit here
on the window ledge
watching the falling snow

take my hand
i beseech you
show me how to love
and how to be yours

hold me close
i can hear you
as your heart beats
but you seem so empty

let me hold you
light a candle
all in the name of holyness
so eternity can bind us close

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The Pondering Panda.. "god is a sock" 愉快 鬚 says:
"Take me by the hand
help me understand
show me what love is
Seal it with a kiss"

sam's ideas kick ass.

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  • Shaded DevilFox gold member
    October 19

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    lol sounds like Sams got some great ideas. lol (i didnt forget my clappie ppl lol)

    • yey clappy people! lol
      he does! for someone who done product design at uni, he's pretty awesome. no one can be as amazing as you though angel.


  • Pondering-panda
    October 18

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    I agree my ideas do kick ass ^_^
    I like this one aswell! I think im going to give up writing my own stuff and just come up with ideas that you can borrow from