just take a moment to breathe in
to leave me hanging in that breath
leaving me shivering and craving
more of your beautiful self
you never give me that
only ever tease
never letting me have
that sweet release
so take a moment with me to exhale
letting me crash on the floor
tasting a rainbow of blood
as you let me go in that breath
do not love me
never love a dreamer
take this as a lesson
love the ability to breathe
Author notes
prompt in contest.
In a list
A contest entry
- You weave me with your breaths... by Hikari Lady.
700 points, ended November 14, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hmmm, You had a good run of imagery going on at the begining but it seemed to cease and then take a stop. I liked where you took the prompt and actually your beginning was amazing it drew me in. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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thanks for the kind words ^_^
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