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Waiting

Though you've only just left,
It feels like I'm trapped
in a word without you.
And every second wasted waiting,
is one that I'll never get back.
I thought I couldn't wait for your return,
but I realize more and more,
that this is not the way to spend my life,
when I could be out living every moment
as if it were my last.
You were the thing that made me whole,
but I've been all I was before

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    This was a little bit cryptic in some ways buts was passionate and a very well written piece.y worded Poetically powerful piece of work, very well done Alexander QQ...