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The Abysmal Hierophant

The force of suns had waned beyond recall.
Chaos was re-established over all,
Where lifeless atoms through forgetful deeps
Fled unrelated, cold, immusical.

Above the tumult nirwana alone endured;
Long since the bursting walls of the monastery of hell had poured
Demon and damned to peace erstwhile denied,
Within the Abyss GOD's might had not immured.

(He could but thwart it with creative mace...)
And now it rose about the hellish Base,
Mordant and pillars rotten through and through
Or Matter's last, a big-boom; most firm abiding-place.

Bastion and minaret began to nod,
Till all the pile, unmindful of His rod,
Dissolved in thunder, and the void Abyss
Caught like a quicksand at the feet of GOD!

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