This crowd of words I've bound to you
Confessions penned in whispered scheme
They came to me of early hours
We met last night inside a dream
Your raven hair from heavens touch
Framed lips of silkened ruby shine
So nestled in your cream and lace
We melted in sweet warmth divine
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hmmm. im generally not into rhyming poetry, but this has a singsong older quality to it i like. very pretty, i feel like it could have gone on forever, like those dusty old books you find sometimes by authors (sadly) no one ever heard of, pages filled with a saga length poem/tale. yay im feeling all sentimental.
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How beautifully descriptive your words are!
The rhyme and flow of this piece is purely flawless!
It's short yet sweet ~ this is a moment worth capturing.
Thank you for posting. I hope you have a lovely evening!
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Many thanks for your kind words my friend
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Liquid pools of sensual delight
words every woman would love bound to her,
Some one is very blessed indeed.
Excellent Write, Sheer romance.
Cyber Hugs,
Cheryl
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