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Boiling Water

I am like boiling water.
I am very upset.
He is a pig.
He has me steamed.

Wait!  He's not even worth it.
I shall move on, and on.

He's an arrogant fool.
He thinks he's so smart.
He thinks he can play with my emotions.

I'm sorry.  Wait!
He's not even worth it.
I shall move on and on.

Author notes

This poem is about a Poet on AP I had to block because he's a disgusting pig.

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    October 19

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    Very well done. The anger and disdain boils up in this poem. The repetition of moving on brings the the metaphor of boiling water into sharper focus.

    Mike


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 18

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    gee i wish id seen this before i was being a silly one but im not a pih im just cheeky well practicing to be im not even good at it yet but this poem has some boot in it and the ANs too i promise i wont be cheeky again lol phew got out that one nicely bless ya anyway new friend glenn


  • MJ Forgives
    October 18

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    Well you are right he isn't worth it. Glad your moving on. I really am . Love and Peace!
    -Jess