When I'm just a child
with an imagination free and wild
will you take my hand
and guide me through enigmatic lands?
When I'm in my youth
and all I want is to know the truth
will you open up my heart
and guide my soul to its missing part?
When I build my own life
full of happiness and strife
educate me in the ways
that I can focus on the better days.
When my back is against the wall
and I feel as though I'll lose it all
will you open the door
to show me things I should have seen before.
When I'm standing by
awaiting here for my moment to die
will you open the gate
and free me from disease and hate?
Author notes
Inquiring words that will follow one through nature's course.
A contest entry
- the door of my soul... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
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Why not...? Indeed your prayer would be answerd...and accepted as well..very true and very soulful journey of the words you did here thank you so much...
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I really like this... I like how you can always seem to use rhyme to your advantage...I can't or won't seem to do that but that's what makes the site great...we all write in out own way.
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