Vampire in the rain

Walking through the pouring rain,
cape soaked heavy,like my pain.

Eyes downward i survey my claws,
your blood still fresh,i was the cause.

Now i kneel solemnly by your side,
tenderly i stroke your cheek,wishing you to come back alive.

All i feel is the silence which speaks,
my tears flow freely know as i weep.

A contest entry

Dark writes by darkyinsoul. 700 points, ended October 19, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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darkyinsoul
October 19

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dark and deep
good rhyme
a few things that need to be fixed
other than that good write
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
Br0kEn WiNgS
October 19
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im impressed
beautiful and brilliant. the flow and rhyme of this is perfect. this had a lot of emotion and imagery. i really like this.