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Barely Kept Alive...

 

 

 

 

 

Eyes bloodshot,
bottle in hand,
a simple motion in my chest
i breathe, not much,
barely kept alive.

Lips spill secrets,
whispered tones,
a simple need in my voice
i love,more than enough,
barely kept alive.

Hands grasped,
your fingers between mine,
a simple distraction in my soul
i need, more than a life time,
barely kept alive.

[best friend.life line.the constant i'll never let go]
♥

-♥-Giovanna-♥-

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  • African king
    November 12
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    just that is nice but can you elighten me more on it. any way that is awesome

  • Eusebius
    November 6
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    A good write... nearly harrowing in its diction. Liked it a ton!!!


  • Professor Cool
    October 24
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    Its simple but still strong i like that


  • Papabear 4 Rosered
    October 20
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    just incredible. deep, moving and simply versed. andexcellent read


  • awannabepoet
    October 19
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    How delicate and lovely this is to read, thank you for sharing this little peotic gem.

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 19

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    Great Write....

    ... You are on a roll I like this one very much. Favorite line "Lips Spill Secrets" reminds me of the boy from Colorado that told about the balloon hoax. He spilled the beans on his dad

  • Miseria Cantare
    October 18
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    bravo

    10


  • Wrench-X
    October 18
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    I forgot to give you your well deserved Claps from the Wrench!! mwahahaha Rawrness

  • Wrench-X
    October 18

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    This was a very Beautiful peice of work. I can see why Gio favors you over any. you two are inseperable friends with an everlasting bound entertwined in eachothers life. She is your support and you are hers. You two are the the most wonderful people I have ever met and if I may say, It is my honor and my Privilage to be apart of both of your alls lives. With much love and care.

    Forever and always,
    Chris


  • Jbloc Armada.
    October 18

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    Awww. i love you baby! i'll always be your lifeline! this is like the sweetest thing ever. i love love love love you so so so much.

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