What is love?
Can this humble poet answer?
How I wish it was that simple
to write what I feel,
for I have yet to translate
the language of the heart
that which is uttered from the lips
of once upon a times;
What is love?
I often try to define.
Letters alone are but a sigh
and those that stand together,
pillars holding up
so grand an emotion,
yet no thought
ever climbed to its pinnacle
and as a chain
though strong and rich,
I know too well
so much can happen
between the lines;
Once more I will ask what is love?
But how can one who lies and betrays answer?
How I wish it were that simple,
a time when mistakes
were as new as we,
when one night in your arms could undo,
instead patience's weary fingers
have today a far more tangled knot;
yet you choose to love me....... still
For the last time I will ask what is love?
yet this humble poet's pen is tied.
Oh how I wish I were an artist
instead of a writer!
Why? you ask,
because with just a few strokes
perhaps I could paint it,
for it would simply yet completely
be a portrait of you.
A contest entry
- a contest since I haven't had one in a while. by etoile.
1500 points, ended October 25, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like the repetition of the question 'what is love?' because it is something most people will ask themselves, and the way you wrote about it is so poetic. the imagery is beautiful. great write.
goodluck and thanks for entering

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A beautiful piece that makes us look and try to answer that very question. Lovethe way ylu kept comeing back to the question to get the readr to really think. Then finally showing where that love is,




