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Why can't you see me?

Pull me out from under your bed,
please hold me,i'm not dead.

Hug my small doll body one last time,
make me feel emotion,it's not a crime.

wipe my last falling tear,
your doll i remain forever that is clear.

Then throw me back in the darkness i dred,
as i know your love for me is truely dead.

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  • vampireintherain
    October 19
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    very good poem I could feel the emotion in this