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If I Wrote You A Poem To Your Heart's Content, This World Wouldn't Be The Same

I understand the fundamental
facts to the traditional beliefs
of a time when we don't want
to live in this thing we call life.
To understand is to have
experienced the cold hard truths.
I, sir, have experienced beyond
what you know. So all I can
ask of you is that you give me
one chance that I never gave
to anyone else. Give yourself
a better future I couldn't give
to myself because I was too
stubborn to seek an understanding
individual to guide me through.
I may be alone, you may FEEL
alone. But to understand is that
there is at least ONE person out
there in the world that goes through
the same shit you do. Dear sir,
You ARE NOT ALONE.

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  • Darkmoon
    November 14
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    This is good. Thanks for the entry and good luck.


  • Broken Thoughts
    November 2

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    I like this, just what I needed to hear acctually.

    you may FEEL
    alone. But to understand is that
    there is at least ONE person out
    there in the world that goes through
    the same shit you do. Dear sir,
    You ARE NOT ALONE.

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