She can't find herself
She's lost in her dreams
Facing her cold feelings
She's pulled into reality
Never to return again
The dreams become surreal
She's pulled into darkness
She wonders what's happening
She can't find herself
She's lost in her reality
What comes to mind when you read this?
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good job!!
i love the emotion very nice!
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sounds like you may wander too far in your imagination at times even when its escape to find abit of peace. i may be wrong though lol.
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REALLY GOOD
i love the emotion in this piece.
very dark.
great write!
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nice.
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Alternative Reality
There are times I wish I could travel away from this reality. It is a beautiful thing to be lost in the dream world, but it is nice to be able to travel back at will. Something that may help this poem might be to ground it in a tangible image maybe using a simile. I really could relate to this poem. Keep writing!!!
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