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diwali cleaning (a modern haiku)


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diwali cleaning --
dangling from my broomstick
wild honeybees

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Diwali, the festival of lights, was yesterday. We clean the home few days prior to it. On one such day, I was taken by surprise when I accidentally knocked down a bee hive and dangling on my broomstick, were honeybees. So many of them, it was worrisome. I just ran for the next one hour while the bees were chasing me..it was a marathon race for me...I was saved by the neighbour's cow who thinks I'm her mistress because while my neighbours don't much care for her, I feed her like she was my own baby, and so she returned the favour back :-)

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