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Anguish

There are some wounds that can’t be healed. And no matter how strong you are the pain is real. You may try to hide it but it won’t be concealed.

Because the suffering overtakes you and it forces you to kneel. Wishing you never discovered the ability the feel. And no matter how many times you pray for it the pain will never yield.

Because the wounds of the mind are much harder to seal. 

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  • masked-monster
    November 25
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    Wow, this was a great write, I could totally relate to it. Feelings I have had but unable to express! Thanks for sharing it, I enjoyed reading it!