Haunted houses fill up the world.
As the creepy spirits fill your soul.
Lasting 1 night,the warlocks cast spells.
Longing one day werewolfs take their chances to scare many people.
Owls call out in the night,but don't harm you.
Witches and Vampires work together to scare you alive.
Every ghost wheres a covering so they can not be figured outby us humans.
Every skeleton pops out the cemetery to come and haunt you
Now, this is why halloween is the scariest holiday to me,beacuse it's frightening I guess.
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This is a great acrostic, you do a good job of expanding the thoughts of Halloween into the prompt.
However, you haven't placed your choice in the author notes - so you haven't actually followed the rules
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Best of luck to you in the contest.
Shari
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Great acrostic. I think you created a great flow of imagery with this, I especially like the image of skeletons popping out and haunting people However you haven't followed the rules.
Prompt Development = /20
Organization = /20
Poetic Language & Imagery = /20
Use of Language = /20
Overall Impact = /20
Total = 0/100
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