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Death After All

I'm dying today and so are
you. It starts at birth- this
is true. You were called
by nature to live this day;
you start off learning to fid
the right way.

Dying starts at the first step
in life. Your mission on earth
is to find the wrong and make it
right.

Be quick and run your race of
love. Be happy to represent
your God above. The light
of truth is not hard to see.
Being good makes it easy.


Death comes with every day-
anything can take you a way.
You can be killed before
your time is done. Life is good
but you only get one.


Life is not long- it's like the wink
of and eye; you are here today-
baby, adult, old age, then you
die. Life is not long at all;
all things of life will someday
fall.


Be quick to your goal of
righteousness and truth.
The life you live is the proof.
The man-made clock
on the wall will stay behind
after all.



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  • alexandra13
    November 2
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    I like this

    This is a very simply poem ..with a reality check..that is so vivid...love it


  • Vhoori
    October 28

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    I love this. It takes something as simple as birth and turns in into the start of a clock, like sand through the hourglass, to me. I'm surprised that this doesn't have any comments. It's really good. I'm going to feature it when I get more points. I always have to share this sort of jewel with my friends. Keep up the good writing! Until then, I'm bookmarking this.


    Vhoori