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Temptation

by nightfall
I can’t resist the temptation
of my addiction
and I make
three more cuts
with my razor blade

One big, bloody
Two smaller ones around it
It takes two of those
Big economy sized band-aids
To cover them
And blood still pokes out
The edges

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  • gxer11
    October 19
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    all very good except the "I have gone to bed at 8:11
    To get up early for school tomorrow"


  • totheend
    October 19

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    its so sad but still so true.
    i hope that you will get better soon, and that you dont have to feel so alone.
    i know what its like, i stoped cutting for about 8 weeks and last week i started again.
    i think the poem is really good.


  • Scarlet x Stone
    October 18

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    Hey, i hope you never feel alone with self harm, so many of us suffer with it and there are always others to talk to, you are never alone xxx