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Dying

I think dying
Is like falling into
a deep, dreamless sleep

and imagining it is like
trying to remember
an event that occurred
before you were born,

you just can’t do it.

Sure, I’d like to believe
in God, and a Plan for us,
and maybe a Greater Meaning for life

but if you believe in heaven
you have to believe in hell,
and that’s where I’d probably go
anyway.

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  • The Devil18
    October 19
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    this is kinda sad but i love it

  • thats really sad but breathe taking beautiful
    i hope your alright
    and i know tht witha little hope you can make it through
    dont give up!!!
    -hugz-