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Cut

all this writing about it
makes me want a cut
I think I’ll use my safety pin
(haha, “safety”)
where?
my leg I think
a vein on my knee

it doesn’t bleed now
but tomorrow I know
it will be a small
swollen dot
not enough to make anyone who sees
think twice

I think I will wear shorts tomorrow
screw anyone who thinks they know me,
who thinks they care

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