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It's All A Little Bit Broken.

These silent sobs will be my falling.
            my failing.

I’ll wear a smile today to distract from the sad eyes
( I tied the ribbon too tight and now I cannot take them off)

Maybe today no one will see. I see.
    I see their averted eyes
            their pleading eyes
            their worried eyes

And I start to wonder…did they tie the ribbon too tight too?

I think the scales have broken. (They say I’m tiny when the mirror says I’m huge)
But maybe the mirror has too.

I think my friends are broken. (like the scales)


I think I might be broken.

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  • xtragicanax
    October 20

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    i think your poem really helped me just now,
    i think i needed to hear i wasn't alone in what i am feeling.
    thanx.i am anorexic & bulimic.
    i cut myself & have had a pill-popping problem.
    if you ever need to talk plz email me i have been through
    a lot and am still experiencing life but if you want advice, or would like to give some?i would love to talk.
    please keep writing.