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I Call It: 3 Minutes

I've stumbled in
a little thing.
A little game
of little shame.
And all i got
was a stupid rock.
Called a smock.
A Stupid fuck.
Hopefully one day
I will go astray
To make my way
For my own sake.
Heaven save me!
Let me be
Mother Mary
Rest in peace!
Forgive me father
for I have sinned
World that falter
I can't live in.

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wrote it in 3 minutes. not good ey?

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  • Darkmoon
    November 14
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    This is interesting. I wouldn't call it bad. It's pretty good. Thanks for th e entry and good luck.