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Solitary Tomorrow

You stop short
all anger instantly dissipated
by a cold and rational
economic calculation
that slices clean through  
the hyper emotion
omnipresent

not a moment ago

me - openly observing
my dreaded confirmation
of a solitary tomorrow

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  • still.she.waits
    November 13

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    ouch...
    your word choice, and portrayal of emotion
    is superb.
    and the feeling just cuts to the bone.

    a solitary tomorrow....
    that's a thought that scares me...