invade my space take up my time
climb the walls i have created
sing ever so sweetly in my ear
turn my darkness into light
free the thoughts i hold so dear
comfort my bleeding heart so cold
ive closed out the world
blocked the sun from my window
friends have all but left my door
but here i am standing at the door
telling you to invade my space
stalk me till the tides turn blue
there isnt anything i wouldnt
give for your happiness even
though my heart is beating cold
so please invade my heart
i cant stand a day being apart
you are the key to my black soul
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Good write....
... However I would take the time to Capitalize the "i"'s in your poem, and put the apostrophe int "ive" first line third stanza. but other than that this is one fine poem
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