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Sacred Grove...

Your voice is like the breeze that whisphers through the grove,
Your eyes are like the stars who rest in heavens abode,
I feel your heartbeat when my eyes close and rest in dreams
Your face a sweetest repose
I rest my thoughts in your precious words

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  • MasterFoxFang
    October 18

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    Beautiful

    this is a short and to the point poem but with so few words you were able to capture the thought you wanted to preceive well done m'lady i love the flow and nothing is off love it


  • Goddess of illusion
    October 18
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    Wow, I loved this... Beautifully done...

    Keep on penning