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Glittered Clouds

 

 

Don't do pretty, don't do nice
only clouds give good advice
watch the angels, watch them sing
glitter, glitter, dead girls swing.

Dominoes fall down and down
glittered clouds should never frown
read the papers, read the news
I lose ~ I lose ~ I lose ~ I lose ..

 

 

 

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Prompt :
3. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puwuT_O8RL4&feature=related

I really like the song never heard it before.
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  • Mango Memories
    October 19
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    YES. I LOVE THIS.


  • Naridill
    October 19

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    Glitter makes it look like her boobs are jiggling

    I adore this piece though, it's lyrical.