The tongue slips softly in between;
Barriers of bone, to hold back,
the flow of logic from within.
Silence speaks;
With a tongue of silver,
Lined in its own creation;
irrationality.
So, bite your tongue
a little harder baby,
I don't think I felt the sting.
That soft, secure sting.
The sting of silence,
Words left justly unsaid;
Between barriers of endless bone,
that flow from logic within.
Author notes
Prompt:
"So, bite your tongue
a little harder baby,
I don't think I felt the sting."
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Written to portray the concept of having to bite your tongue to prevent yourself from hurting someone whom you care about's feelings, regardless of the fact you speak the whole hearted truth.
A contest entry
- Bite Your Tongue by Randomly Beautiful.
400 points, ended October 18, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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love this. it is good
however i suck at comments. so >


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Nicely done. Thank you so much for participating.
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Thanks, i'll say its a challenge for me NOT to rhyme, interesting contest. Thanks for the read.
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