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to like or not to like?

As I simply hope and wish
Fear lures in the shadows
This is such an innocent act for me
But I am human and I do have desires as well

I see you--
Here, there, everywhere
Your presences warms my heart, but yet...
I question the very thought

Your smile makes me believe--
Believe that we can be happy, together
But as I believe, there's doubt hiding in hope
For fear, doesn't want this to be

If I confess to you,
Will my feelings still be there?
Or will it die before I have the courage to tell you?
Because I'm torn

Joy is good to have
But, this joy pains my heart
For I, foresee my future
And I know it is not meant to be

I like you
But I feel like I shouldn't
I don't like you
But I feel like I should

If one says "yes" while the other says "no",
Will I forever feel torn for you?

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  • Haret5
    October 18

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    Well Done

    I liked your poem. My only suggestion is that next time please place periods where they are supposed to be because I found it odd that you put question marks but no periods. Of course you can keep it like this way to be more unique, so you decide what to do. Well Done.