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Spider

The Spider holds
My deepest thoughts
My feelings
My guilts
My fault

The Spider has my other side
The one nobody sees
Unless they know the spider

Unless people know the Spider
That has my darkness
People won't ever find it
It being me
My inside

Few people know...
Me
THE me
The one I wish you knew
The one I have hidden for some time
The pain
Pain that kills
That destroys
That beats
Hates
Controls

This Spider has the key
To my heat
I trust it
With this key
That can either
Destroy me
Kill me
Make me
Create me
Love me
Like me
Hate me
Despise me
Or all of the above

I will love the Spider
For these reasons
But
Hate it
For the same

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  • INsOmNiAs-RiOt
    October 18
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    Woo! Kick ass poem. Love the intensity of your flow. Keep it up love.

    <3 Madi K.

  • soyez gentils
    October 18
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    Clever

    I like the twist in the spider's tail!