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Taking it all into Consideration

Nothing is lost,
it integrates into everything it touches which follows,
granular, extracellular,
multiple universes we can't even imagine...
yet we strive for what we want in this complex mechanism,
we can't even begin to understand.
We work on the probability,
that if I do this, that will happen,
such primitive conclusions,
assumptions...
second guessings of what we can't even begin to define.
This world and the slowest child,
knows they can not understand.
The mistake of the brilliant,
or even everyday functioning,
is that of confidence.
We live in a universe of uncertainty.
Everything is controlled and managed,
by frequency and probabilities we never ever even consider.
Sure, we can control these infinite variables,
but life comes from the far left,
and hits hard onto our reality.

Pretty in Chaos.

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  • bobanonymous gold member
    November 8
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    I have always said "anything you can do on a Spirograph
    you can do in real-time as you are losing your mind".


    • neurosine gold member
      November 8
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      I wonder if it follows a Fibonacci sequence. Maybe that's why losing is is so often attributed a spiraling course. Until you fall out the bottom. Then I think you're then in the gutter. I'm not sure. I've managed to stay mostly afloat for awhile now. Sometimes I think the neuroses help. I'm certain delusions do. We're pretty fantastic at protecting our egos. Sometimes too good.


      • bobanonymous gold member
        November 14
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        Hey don't take this the wrong way but sometimes you sound like my father's guru.


        • neurosine gold member
          November 15
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          Yeah, I get kind of guruish sometimes. You talk about infinity and our relationship to the universe and you can't help it.


  • myrataal silver member
    October 18
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    Weather beaten ...

    I wait on the excitement of the exit.

    Love
    Myra


    • neurosine gold member
      October 18
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      Thanks for going through and reading these last few pieces Myra...I just kept getting that knock on the door yesterday that said, "Write this down."
      Really though, nothing new to say...

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