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stubborn as a sinner's soul

Missing image
with little triumph
heaven flirted through cloud and cosmos
to beg me to come home





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(image from contest)

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 31
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    a little long for most haku but I like what you did here thanl you for your entry


  • wildflowr
    October 17

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    Hmm.

    Nice subject matter. I like the picture. It really goes with the poem. Reminds me of stuff!