all the words I said to you
all the colors that I drew
wasting my time on you
must be something I can do
every hour long phone call
every hour long drive
wasting my time on you
what else can I do
plans that never came to fruition
your just another addiction
I'm just wasting my time on you
and there's nothing else I will do
I will never again waste time on you
I'm sick of your games, sick of you
dont come after me, don't write a rhyme
you'll be just wasting your time
A contest entry
- i'm angry! quick contest - at least 10 lines - will close in one hour. by sideways hourglass.
400 points, ended October 17, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
thoughts? is the title any good?
Comments
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I really like it, Its exactly how im feeling right now. I like the flow of it and it rolls easily off the tongue. kudos
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Oh..this is the sad phase of th hearts..and painful story of the love..very touching piece written by the soul of a poet..well said....thanks for sharing..
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i clearly said no rhyme, but don't sweat it this time. this has a lyrical edge to it and i think if you played around with the format and made some adjustments, you'd have yourself a good song.
thanks for entering. :]
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