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you could say

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the sun slept late today
it was hidden under
my sheets

i was rummaging
for whispers and found
a strand of light
urging me to open
myself up

you could say 
i might not ever
have found you

i guess we will wait and see

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  • charcoal
    October 18
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    a beautiful poem


  • solarjinx
    October 17

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    'i guess we will wait and see'

    you ended this perfect poem perfectly, I love it. You keep writing like this and the rest of us will surely become quite jealous!