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A normal saturday

Wake up to the smell of sizzling bacon,
And the sweet smell of Pancakes.
The house cold and creaking,
I hear my momma still sleeping.
Daddy is up making breakfast,
Happy to be awake,
Instead of in my bed and restless.
Not able to sleep for ages,
All these nightmares making me testless.
Grumpy and bitchy,
Take it out on everybody in my way.
The sound of rain,
Lightly tapping on the roof,
This old house is just falling apart,
Piece by piece.
Call my friends,
To have them come over,
So I won't be alone,
And deal with my mother....

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For a contest called "story of your life!" by Rockerforlife!!!!

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  • rocker4life
    November 9

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    I can't really say where my favorite part is or least favorite. It was all really good and it was a pleasure reading it. Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • kenziebot1
    November 4
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    i think its good